Oh god you are in the heaven, endowed
with an indisputable happiness,
Absconded from this mundane world of suffering
and unhappiness,
You are celebrating an endurable life with
an incredible pleasantness,
And I am envy of thy contentment which
is free of insidiousness.
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You will witness the human beings with the full of uncertainties,
We have no an omnipotent power to hold our
breath as you does,
Sooner or later we are prone to die and
decay losing our human entities.Like a fresh morning crystal dews on the mountain,
We have no time glance at the evening sun setting behind the horizon,
Today or tomorrow, we have to succumb to the fearful death in pain.
Our life is alike floating object on ocean, continuously swayed by ripples and waves of the ocean. Nicely composed. thanks.
ReplyDeleteSir this is my first poetic writing ever composed in my life time. Being a non English teacher, I am handicapped in any form of writing. However I am learning to write in this perfect forum. There your comments are highly valuable sir.
ReplyDeleteYou are writing pretty well although we sail in the same boat. We are Science teacher by design but that should not deter us from writing. English is a ground language for the subject. So, lets process writing skills and hone it time and again.
ReplyDeleteDamcho sir thanks for suddenly boosting my morality of writing. I will keep writing always sir.
DeleteVery nice. Human beings are certainly full of uncertainties!
ReplyDeleteMam I would be grateful if mam could comments on my writing because English being non- mother tongue to me, I cannot write without error even a single sentence. Your comments will be always cherished mam.
DeleteI am pleased with your poem and i shall candidly say that you have good command on language.
ReplyDeleteSir, I am happy that at least I could pleased you with my writings. keep reading sir.
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